Hello 7X1
Here is the poem we created today as a class,
Please feel free to comment on this post with aspects you like about it or things you would change to improve it.
Well done; good work ladies.
The sand was an ever changing toy.
Surfers surfed the subtle waves.
Sun worshipers topped up terrific tans.
Peaceful pairs strolled up and down the shore
Siblings built sandcastles like skyscrapers.
The sun was a sea of liquid gold
The warm glow of the sun
Sunlight dancing on the sea.
Clear blue sky
Tingling in my stomach.
Enthusiasm
Eager
Impatient
Anticipation
Lightning and thunder raged with fury.
Chilling breeze
Claps of thunder.
Sand swept into the air in the sharp breeze.
A curtain of rain beat down.
Scared
Terrified
Petrified
Scared stiff
Frozen in fear
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